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Bunnymen Haiku

Postby tonywojo » Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:32 pm

There's something in these tears
Turning me to rust
I need someone to help me
i sometimes use caps and punctuation for emphasis
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Postby rimmel65 » Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:05 am

Don't tell me that my ship is coming in

Nothing comes to those who wait

time's running out the door you're running in...
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Postby withahip » Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:16 pm

very nice.
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Postby Mr. Brian » Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:56 pm

withahip wrote:very nice.


No offense but you need to work on the haiku there hip. :wink:

Haiku: Seventeen-syllable verse form, arranged in three lines of five, seven and five syllables.

Actually none of this is a haiku is it?
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Postby withahip » Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:30 pm

I just assumed the quality members in this forum would have counted out the syllables.




What d'you say, When your
heart's in pieces, How d'you play
Those cards in sequence?
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Postby rimmel65 » Tue Jul 15, 2008 2:10 am

Mr. Brian wrote:No offense but you need to work on the haiku there hip. :wink:

Haiku: Seventeen-syllable verse form, arranged in three lines of five, seven and five syllables.

Actually none of this is a haiku is it?


Sorry!I haven't counted,but those verse are so beutiful! :cool:
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Postby tonywojo » Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:48 am

rimmel65 wrote:Sorry!I haven't counted,but those verse are so beutiful! :cool:


Exactly right.

Blame WAH - he started me on al this!

Thanks Uncle.
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Postby withahip » Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:45 am

Count, people, count.
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Postby JackT » Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:26 am

You kill when you talk
And the enemy weakens
Your words start to walk
"He was a mongoose, rather like a little cat in his fur and his tail, but quite like a weasel in his head and his habits."
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Postby tonywojo » Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:53 pm

JackT wrote:You kill when you talk
And the enemy weakens
Your words start to walk


JT

Brilliant.

Best one yet.

Knew Mac had it in him.
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Postby JackT » Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:02 pm

Besides having 5-7-5 syllable structures, it is also my favorite Ocean Rain track!
"He was a mongoose, rather like a little cat in his fur and his tail, but quite like a weasel in his head and his habits."
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Postby watercolors » Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:34 pm

withahip wrote:Count, people, count.


Ya sound like Mr. Lips hisself. Hmmm....
Screaming from beneath the waves...
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Postby crystal daze » Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:30 am

Stab a sorry heart
with your favourite finger
paint the whole world blue
There's times when I've been deeply indifferent
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Postby Mr. Brian » Wed Jul 16, 2008 9:24 am

withahip wrote:Count, people, count.


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Postby Kounelaki » Wed Jul 16, 2008 9:37 am

Mr. Brian wrote:Image


:lol: :lol: :lol: (in the Count's laugh)
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