There could be a bit more distortion.
My main thing with it is there's not enough variety among the tracks
and there's a lot of female backing singing, which sounds a little like The The in places.
Nothing at all against The The, I just think less would have been better.
Not a big fan of backing singers anyway unless it's in the right genre - like Disco or Donnie and Marie or something.

Every word is like an unnecessary stain on silence and nothingness.