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Postby tonywojo » Tue May 31, 2011 4:37 pm

Kounelaki wrote:But he has a talent for haiku.


last exhibited when?
i sometimes use caps and punctuation for emphasis
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Postby Kounelaki » Tue May 31, 2011 11:42 pm

tonywojo wrote:last exhibited when?


Many moons ago.
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Postby tonywojo » Wed Jun 01, 2011 12:40 am

Kounelaki wrote:Many moons ago.
correct thank you
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Postby withahip » Thu Jun 02, 2011 1:09 pm

But he has a talent for haiku.
last exhibited when?
Many moons ago.
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Postby girlwithnoname » Thu Jun 02, 2011 3:50 pm

withahip wrote:But he has a talent for haiku.
last exhibited when?
Many moons ago.


That was bad haiku
Too many syllables used
Hip needs more schooling
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Postby withahip » Thu Jun 02, 2011 4:19 pm

That was wojo haiku newbie - perhaps you best keep quiet till you know your way around these parts missy.
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Postby tonywojo » Thu Jun 02, 2011 4:24 pm

withahip wrote:That was wojo haiku newbie - perhaps you best keep quiet till you know your way around these parts missy.


I use 6-4-6 religiously
i sometimes use caps and punctuation for emphasis
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Postby KillingMoon » Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:10 pm

An haiku is 5-7-5 and always 17 syllables in total.

"Birds singing in the dark-Rainy dawn"....... (J.K)
" You know when Heaven end hell collide

There are no in-betweens.."
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Postby moses (2) » Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:50 am

KillingMoon wrote:An haiku is 5-7-5 and always 17 syllables in total.

"Birds singing in the dark-Rainy dawn"....... (J.K)


ah for gods sake let's not start that carry on again about what Haiku is!!!

Can we all just delight in the genius of Barney and also the wiggles

all the raindrops - BARNEY

If all the raindrops were lemon drops and gumdrops, oh what a life I would lead.
Standing outside with my mouth open wide.
Eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh
If all the raindrops were lemon drops and gumdrops, oh what a life I would lead.

If all the snowflakes were candy bars and milk shakes, oh what a life I would lead.
Standing outside with my mouth open wide.
Eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh
If all the snowflakes were candy bars and milkshakes, oh what I life I would lead.

If all the sun beams were bubble gum and ice cream, oh what a life I would lead.
Standing outside with my mouth open wide.
Eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh
If all the sun beams were bubble gum and ice cream, oh what a life I would lead

rock-a-bye your bear - Wiggles
Everybody clap, everybody sing, la, la, la, la, la
Bow to your partner, then you turn around, yippie
Hands in the air, rock-a-bye your bear
Bear's now asleep, sh, sh, sh
Bear's now asleep, sh, sh, sh

Everybody clap, everybody sing, la, la, la, la, la
Bow to your partner, then you turn around, yippie
Hands in the air, rock-a-bye your bear
Bear's now asleep, sh, sh, sh
Bear's now asleep, sh, sh, sh

Bear's now asleep, sh, sh, sh
Bear's now asleep, sh, sh, sh
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Postby KillingMoon » Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:57 am

If my grandfather had wheels he would be a wheelbarrow... :cool:
" You know when Heaven end hell collide

There are no in-betweens.."
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Postby Dr Cheese » Fri Jun 03, 2011 12:10 pm

Wouldn't he need handles too?
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Postby withahip » Fri Jun 03, 2011 1:04 pm

Did Killing Moon really just explain to everyone what a haiku is?

Mr. Brian, delete its account.
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Postby KillingMoon » Fri Jun 03, 2011 2:43 pm

withahip wrote:Did Killing Moon really just explain to everyone what a haiku is?

Mr. Brian, delete its account.


If you know a better explanation of the metric ,you can write it

......"its"? Im not a wheelbarrow :cool:

Good haiku to everyone.
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There are no in-betweens.."
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Postby tonywojo » Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:18 pm

KillingMoon wrote:If you know a better explanation of the metric ,you can write it

......"its"? Im not a wheelbarrow :cool:

Good haiku to everyone.


my haiku meter is what i want it to be
i sometimes use caps and punctuation for emphasis
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Postby withahip » Sat Jun 04, 2011 6:57 am

KillingMoon wrote:If you know a better explanation of the metric ,you can write it

......"its"? Im not a wheelbarrow :cool:

Good haiku to everyone.


If you want to stick with the kigo rules, sure. Writers such as Onishi Yasuyo would disagree with your elementary school confines. You may want to open up to gendai haiku - as wojo is obviously a master of


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